Style
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Use as few words as possible
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Use simple, specific, clear, and informative wording
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Use the same words and grammatical forms, lengths, and styles repeatedly
Tone and voice
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Use natural, conversational language and not robotic, funny, cool or clever
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Address users in second-person (you) and use first-person plural for the application (we)
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Use gender-neutral language
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Use polite language
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Use 'please' and 'sorry' only when necessary, for something inconvenient or unplanned
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Use positive instead of negative framing
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Use positive contractions to avoid sounding too formal
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Avoid using negative contractions as they can appear too informal
- their, them, theirs, salesperson
- Welcome to this application
- X appears when detail view has selected events
- cannot, will not
- you’ll, we’ve
- his, hers, him, salesman
- Hey there!
- X doesn’t appear if detail view has no selected events
- can’t, won’t
- you will, we have
Length
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Use sentences only when necessary
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Use short words (3, 4, or 5 letters) instead of long words (8 or longer)
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Use short, scannable segments, not paragraphs
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Keep sentences under 25 words (average = 15 words)
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Keep titles under 65 characters (including spaces)
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Use info icons only when necessary: Icons cannot contain the same content as the UI
Use of big and small letters (capitalization/casing)
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Capitalize the first letter of the first word in a title / sentence / tooltip / menu item / list item / button
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Capitalize proper nouns, i.e. places, organizations, tools, languages, products and things: Siemens, SIMATIC PCS myexpert, iOS, JavaScript, MindSphere
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Capitalize named app functions and UI elements: Go to Settings, Allocate users in User management, Press OK
- Go to Settings
- Press OK
- Log in
- For more information, see Siemens Industry Online Support.
- Go To Settings
- Press OK
- LOG IN
- For more information, see Siemens industry online support.
Common UX wording mistakes
- time zone
- log file
- log in (as an action)
- login (as a noun)
- equipment
- feedback
- training
- current
- avoid "shall"
- Siemens has
- 34 million / 35 billion
- 34 million
- timezone
- logfile
- login
- log in
- equipments
- feedbacks
- trainings
- actual
- user shall manage users
- Siemens have
- 34’ / 35“
- 34 millions