General rules
Keep messages short and concise.
- Pump 3 cycle complete 14:32.
- The operational sequence of Pump 3, located within Zone 2B, activated at 07:34 by admin 049 has completed its cycle (timestamp 14:32).
Use a professional, informative tone for routine updates and only include relevant information.
- System backup completed at 21:00.
- Don’t worry! We’ll make sure your backup is complete before your morning coffee on Friday!
Use clear timestamps for context, clarity, prioritization and record keeping.
- Motor overload detected at 14:01:15
- Emergency stop activated at 21:03:27
- Notification list:
Motor 3 overheating
Valve 7 malfunction - System shutdown initiated 10 minutes ago.
- Lubrication check due for press machine 2 in 3 days.
Avoid urgency wording as these types of notifications are typically not as critical as warnings.
- System backup complete.
- System backup completed at 15:00.
- System backup done! Open and check now!
Avoid adding user actions when possible as these notifications should not impact the user workflow.
- Sensors calibrated. No further action required.
- Sensors calibrated. Click to check sensors (live link), calibration settings (live link) or manage your sensors (live link).
Use sentence casing to align with our UX writing guidelines.
- System will be updated within three hours.
- Scheduled maintenance for Line 4 starts at 14:00.
Use minimal punctuation to keep notifications easy to read and without clutter or cognitive overload.
- System update on line 4 starts at 14:00.
- Notification: System update! Line: 4 / Starts: 14:00.
Use industrial icons only when absolutely necessary and avoid emojis.
- Line 3 shift schedule changed. See what's new.
- 🔄 Line 3 shift schedule updated. 👉 See what’s new.
Dos and Don'ts
- Do use an alternative modal if your notifications are too long and cover multiple points
- Do make sure users understand the notification is not critical
- Don’t add multiple pieces of information into one notification
- Don’t insert multiple user actions into short notifications